She said:

“She was more than a disappearance.”

So they changed it.

Clara Bennett Vance lived, worked and raised her infant daughter on this land before her life was cut short in 1954. Her family continued searching for the truth.

Better.

PART 59 — EVELYN ON THE PLAQUE

We debated including Evelyn.

Eventually:

Her daughter Evelyn survived and built a family of her own, unaware of the full truth of her mother’s disappearance.

Laura cried when she read it.