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On the way to a family reunion, my husband suddenly went quiet—then whispered, “Turn the car around.” Chapter 1: The Unusually Normal Trip The inside of our SUV was a chaotic symphony of domestic life, the kind of stifling normalcy that usually drove me crazy but today felt oddly comforting. In the backseat, my three …